Art I'm Making: Another Collage and Some Rethinking (July 28, 2013)

The first collage I made a couple of weeks ago began to look wrong the more I looked at it. I took it down off the wall and tried to "fix" it. I ended up completely transforming it. The original work no longer exists--which is a good thing; clearly the reworked version is much better (top photo). I've since done another one, which I'm rather pleased with (below). More is brewing in my head....

[Update: These were the first two collages I made. The first one survives. The one below here was later cut up and transformed into three smaller pieces.]